Backyard guests
Last december in the beginning of the summer, we discover some little guests on our backyard. They were mice.
I took some pictures of them and I leave them alone, but or sausage dog (dachshund) did not share that idea.
Our daughter still remember where the "mice mommy took them to home".
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Backyard guests
Last December, in at the beginning of the summer, we discovered some little small new guests in our backyard. They were mice.
I took some pictures of them and I leave left them alone, but or our sausage dog (dachshund) did not share that have the same idea.
Our daughter still remember where that the "mice mommy mice's mommy took them to back to their home".
Good job for one of your shorter compositions! Really just minor changes required and I hope that my changes to your last sentence conveys what you wanted to say.
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Backyard guests
Last December, in the beginning of the summer,(/or/at summer's beginning) we discovered (last december = you use past tense) some little guests on in our backyard. They were mice.
I took some pictures of them and I leave (left= past tense) them alone, but or our sausage wiener dog (a dachshund) did not share that (our) idea.
Our daughter still remembers where the "mice mommy took them to home".
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yes, I try a difficult text here, in Spanish we use the quotes in some cases to write some but the real meaning is hidden. In this case we have told to our daughter that the "mice's mother took them to home" but the truth is all mice was killed by our dog
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the 'mice mommy took home' ---It's a little confusing. Who's mom? :) Took home? :)--Does that mean your daughter's mom took them inside the house (gave them a new home)...?
Perhaps you may want to rephrase this. :) Thanks for sharing Cristian :) gracias por escribir.
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