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Happiness I am learning English,because i want to work in countries where English is spoken. My native language is Portuguese, and I grew up in Brazil. I enjoy go out with my friends and family,travel around my country and abroad.

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Happiness

I am learning English because I want to work in countries where English is spoken.

My native language is Portuguese and I grew up in Brazil.

I enjoy going out with my friends and family and traveling around my country and abroad.

 

When you say 'enjoy' and you are refering to activities, you always end the verbs in 'ing.' For example, I enjoy reading.  Also, the commas are not necessary so I deleted them.

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