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Hello Angel, nice post! You made a few mistakes, especially with the verb tenses. It is ok, you will get better with practice! :)
My life is very simple, like two points and one line.
I hoped to do something new with my life, so I decided to operate a small jade shop with my friend---Xia
For the next days I will record a diary about our jade shop.
Our plan is Xia will be in the shop as a sales clerk and I do some paper work and web work. We want put our jade bracelet and jade necklace on the Taobao.
If we want to do that, we will need a professional and free photographer to help our commodity by taking some beautiful photos.
So, I asked my friend who can to help me or recommend somebody to me, finally, one friend can help me and he has a set of professional photograph equipment.
That’s so great, I hope he will come back to Shenzhen as soon as possible.
I hope you and Xia will do well! I want to know more about your jade shop in the future :D
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