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A job I really disliked My first job who I never afroget was a waitress.When I start worked as the waitress I thought it will be only receiving orders and serving meals but I thought wrong. In second day my a supervisor told me you touday working in the kitchen and you peel potatos for 200 people my eyes do very big.My supervisior gave my a knife and peeler and told me now you start.I was very angry and I spent 5 hours pells potatos.When I finished work I go to a home and first week I dreamed as pelling potatoes

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One more thing! :-)

My eyes do became very big.

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  How are you?  That's  a great   essay, and with the correction offered by Susannah Kelly   You  might try to add some more to your composition. I liked reading of your experience.  Very good.  ---Warm Regards,  Bruce

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A job I really disliked

My first job who, which I will never afroget forget, was a waitressing job. When I started worked as the a waitress I thought it will would be only be receiving orders and serving meals but I thought wrong. In On the second day my a supervisor told me you touday "Today you are working in the kitchen and you must peel potatos for 200 people." My eyes do very big. My supervisior gave my me a knife and a peeler and told me "Now you start." I was very angry and I spent 5 hours pells peeling potatos.When I finished work I go to a went home. and For the first week I dreamed as pelling of peeling potatoes.


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