Sorry For My Dear Father
11st February, 2013.
My father woke me up early in the morning. He’d like to take me to visit the other relatives in the country. I didn’t mean to let him down, but I was reluctant to go because I’ve got the car sickness. Besides, I’ll leave for Tianjin tomorrow. The journey is too long to exhaust me. I preferred to stay at home today.
Finally, my father went there alone. If I could have the holidays longer next time, I’ll be you companion, my dear father.
Please correct any mistakes. Many thanks.
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很好努力！
Sorry For My Dear Father
11st February, 2013.
My father woke me up early in the morning. He said he’d like to take me to visit the other relatives in the country. I didn’t mean to let him down, but I was reluctant to go because I’ve got the car sickness. Besides, I’ll leave for Tianjin tomorrow. The journey is too so long to and will exhaust me. So I preferred to stay at home today.
Finally,In the end, my father went there alone. If I could have the longer holidays next time, I’ll be your companion, my dear father.
Please correct any mistakes. Many thanks.
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I made a mistake! haha, It should say I GET CAR SICK! Sorry!
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Sorry For My Dear Father
11st February, 2013.
My father woke me up early in the morning. He’d like wanted to take me to visit the other relatives in the country. I didn’t mean to let him down, but I was reluctant to go because I’ve got the car sickness.I have motion sickness Besides, I’ll leave for Tianjin tomorrow. The journey is too long to it will exhaust drain me so I preferred to stay at home today.
Finally In the end, my father went there alone. If I could have the holidays longer next time Next time if I can have longer holidays, I’ll be your companion, my dear father.
Please correct any mistakes. Many thanks.
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