on the top of a crane
For 3 days a man lives on the top of a crane. He is not allowed to visit his children and he complains about the judges whose decisions are biased after a divorce. He thinks the judges take sides with the mothers instead of being neutral.
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Hello Dear,
my name is Juliet,
I am, very happy to contact you, to day
and i wish to be in good relationship, with you,
and i will be very happy if you can reply me
through my private Email: [email protected]
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No corrections necessary! One style note, though. Some would say that in formal writing (not here) one should spell out numbers from one thru ten, and above ten to use the numeric symbols 11, 12, 100 etc.
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It's very cruelly to forbid the father and children to meet. :( Maybe a man is right )
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