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Meeting an old friend I went downtown to visit a friend of mine that i hadn't contacted with for years last Friday. We had a chat, and she's not the person i used to know anymore. Her appearance, character, hobby ,everything about her is strange to me now. What surprised me most is that she has changed into a lesbian, she plays a straight role in the relationship. I wish her happy although i cant accept that kind of relationship. but look on the positive side,i finally got a lesbian friend.

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Hello Jesse:

 

 

 

 

Meeting an old friend

I went downtown to visit a friend of mine that I hadn't contacted  for years last Friday. We had a chat, and she's not the person I used to know anymore.

Her appearance, character, hobby,   and   everything about her is strange to me now. What surprised me most is that she has changed into a lesbian, she plays a straight role in the relationship. I wish her happiness although I can't accept that kind of relationship. but look on the positive side,  I finally got a lesbian friend.

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  That's  a good brief essay Jesse.  Remember to capitalize  the "I".

 

  Keep writing.  You are doing rather well.---Warm Regards, Bruce

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