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A scared Friday evening I like being in the house alone, because I can relax and write some poetry or reading some book through my laptop. In this last Friday evening my parents were go to visit my aunt and my brothers had gone to watch soccer match I was the house owner just for few hours. For that I made a plane to enjoy reading and writing. I've been writing a wonderful poem while I heard a strange sound in the first floor. I was so scared. My heart has been batted faster, and my leek has been unable to move. This is the first time when I lost my strange,and I've been regretted why I don't go with my parents. I was wondering who made such a noise. I've been scared, because I was thinking that a burglar might be in my house. I would have phoned my parents or brothers but no phone in my bedroom. In the end I managed to leave the room. I walked towards the first floor with an attention to made no noise. My ear listened carefully to be ready for any trouble. Suddenly I heard a strong sound in the kitchen. I've been opened the kitchen door quietly,but here the surprise, it was just my cat who has broken a battle of milk.

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Imagination works very fast:)
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You built up the suspense very well!
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A scary Friday evening

I like being in the house alone, because I can relax and write some poetry or read a book on my laptop. Last Friday evening, my parents  had gone to visit my aunt and my brothers had gone to watch a  soccer match
I was the house owner just for few hours, so I made a plan to enjoy reading and writing. I was writing a wonderful poem, when I heard a strange sound on the first floor.
I was so scared. My heart has never beat faster, and my eyes were unable to move. This was the first time that I  have felt strange and I regretted that I didn't go with my parents.
I was wondering who  could have made such a noise. I was scared, because I was thinking that a burglar might be in my house. I would have phoned my parents or brothers, but there was no phone in my bedroom. In the end, I managed to leave the room. I walked towards the first floor with the intention  not to  make any noise. My ears listened carefully  in order to be ready for any trouble.

Suddenly I heard a loud noise in the kitchen. I opened the kitchen door quietly,but there was just my cat, who had broken a bottle of milk!

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why correct u r the so good. and nice friday hahahahahahahahaah
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Please could someone correct to me this writing

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