My life

I was born on 2nd June of 1976 in a small town located in the north of the country. We lived in a small house, so I had to share my room with my two sisters. When I was at the school, I met a new classmate who played the guitar very well. At this time I was fourteen years old and since then, not a day has passed without I play me playing the guitar. Besides good music, I have always liked travelling. When I finished secondary school I found my self doing nothing, so I decided to do a long trip. I had heard about Kibbutzim, so I went to Israel. I was living lived there for six months. It was an unforgettable experience and it made me want to get to know other cultures. Since then I have travelled a lot. I am currently living in Spain.

Very Good Marta!

I have corrected this as an Englishman. Were I American, I would have happily allowed "play guitar" and "traveling". "Play guitar" is probably entering English via soap operas but it really does need the definite article to sound properly English to me. 

"Travelling" is spelt with two letter Ls in English as opposed to American English.

My life

I was born in 2nd june of 1976, in a small town located in the north of the country. We lived in a small house, so I had to share my room with my two sisters. When I was at the school, I met a new classmate who played guitar very well. At this time I was fourteen years old and since then not a day has passed without I play guitar. Besides good music I have always liked traveling. When I finished secondary school I found my self doing nothing so I decided to do a long trip. I had heard about Kibbuts, so I went to Israel. I was living there for six month. It was an unforgettable experience and it made me want to know other cultures. Since then I have travelled a lot. I am currently living in Spain.