work placement

Hello everybody ! I had received a trainingeeship during for one month, and i decided to write about it, can you help me to and correct please ? =)

Hello, I’m Cassandra, I completed did my training period as Assistant Manager in a company called “La Cave Lyon” located at 132 rue bataille at Lyon 8. This company provides poses a service to, it stocks the wines. In fact, it exist only has one site and so it doesn't have any hasn’t subsidiaries.
The Chief Executive Officer is Mister Gangneux who is also happens to be my supervisor. Moreover he is alone in this company,and does not have any he hasn’t employees.
Concerning the organizational structure, description of the distribution of the employees, M.Gangneux is in charge of all the departments (logistic, commercial,…).
He works only with persons people from Lyon, it’s a little company, and the concept doesn’t allow to working with another country. Besides, there are no n’t competitors. As far as I’m concerned, the company is special because it is the only one single on the market, and theis concept to keep wines has not been exploited.
It works with suppliers like DHL, society of transport, which sells also boxes to send wines. Customers are either individuals or professionals who want stock their wines in the better conditions with good temperature and humidity.
The days were short since I work tofrom 11am to 13 pm and tofrom 14pm to 17pm. The first day, I’m felt anxious and stressed, because I was afraid that I would not meet his expectations had fear don’t succeed what he would ask me. I had various tasks such as making cardboard boxes, prospecting, managingement customers, storing wines,…
I managed to convert one prospect into a like customer. However, I had some any problems. Indeed, when I went meet prospects I had to take my car and it was difficult to find parking. As well, wWorking conditions are very hard because of the temperature which was between 5° and 10°.
We were 2 in the company, therefore the communication was easy and the relationship between us was great. We went atto the restaurant together. I’m feeling very well during my traineeship thanks to my mentor who helped me to learn the job and because I have a say in decision-making.
Eventually, I’m very proud on account of because I improved my oral fluency.  Because I found one customer for the company., hence I felt very useful.
For my future prospects, this work placement offers me the chance to gain valuable experience, it’s useful at any point during my studies and the more responsibilities I have undertake, the more skills meI will acquire. I can weigh up the pros and cons and consider whether thisat job is for me.

Thanks ;)

Not bad.  Pretty lengthy.  

TIP:  I notice you abbreviate alot (example: aren't, haven't - which is good, but you have think about it when you break them apart, aren't = are not, which is not the same as "are no".  Also, the expression/combination is to and from (or vice versa) - example: from 8am to 12pm.

I wish you all the best in your new job!