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Hong Kong SAR China flagKieran Chang
about me l am a high school student .l grew up in Shanghai ,its my hometown . l love delicious food and i hope become a cook in futue.l like Chinese food and Italian food I am learing english,because i want to travel to many places in the world and to make friends with people from around the world. As i travel ,i will see beautiful sceneries typical of the region.i think a good travel has no fixed plans, and is not intent on arriving .i really like it, i enjoyed it.

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about me

l am a high school student.  l grew up in Shanghai ,it's my hometown.  l love delicious food and i hope to become a cook in the future.  l like Chinese food and Italian food.  I am learing english,because i want to travel to many places in the world/around the world and to make friends with people from around the world. As i travel ,i will see beautiful sceneries scenery typical of the each/that region.  i think a good traveller has no fixed plans, and is not intent on arriving.  i really like it, i enjoyed it.

 

Rmember I, the pronoun we use when talking about ourself, is always a Capital Letter.

"scenery" is always singular never plural no matterhow many different places we are talking about.  We talk about "the scenery" and it will often be in reference to all scenery in a country or region.

"travel" is the verb but "traveller" is the noun, we use "traveller" for a person.

Well done, I agree with your view, the best travel experience is when we have no fixed plans and take each day as it comes.  It is not the arrival but how we got there that is important!

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