My Carnival

My Carnival was good because I didn´t have to work but on the other hand I only stayed at home because I hate carnival. Yes, I really hate it! Carnival in my city is very traditional. It´s a popular party that you don´t have to pay for having fun as like in Rio and São Paulo, so during carnival the city has a crowd of people becomes crowded and I don´t like crowds. I spend my free time watching films and surfing on the internet. I also want to say to you that carnival it´s is a violent party. Some people only make mess and it´s really sad when a tourist comes to Brazil and dies. It´s only a tip!!

Just a few things here and there but other than that, your writing is really good! Does Carnival happen at the same time all over Brazil or does it depend on which city you live in?

My Carnival

My Carnival was good because I didn´t have to work; but on the other hand, I only stayed at home because I hate carnival. Yes, I really hate it! Carnival in my city is very traditional. It´s a popular party that you don´t have to pay tfor to having fun. as In Rio and São Paulo, so during carnival the city has a it is crowded of people during Carnival and I don´t like crowds. I spend my free time watching films and surfing on the internet. I also want to say to you that carnival it´s is a violent party.  Some people only make mess, and It´s really sad when a tourists come to Brazil and die. It´s only a tip!!

You did very good Connie!  Keep up the good work.  Thank you for informing me about this.  This will be a useful tip before I think about going to Brazil.  

My Carnival

My Carnival was good because I didn´t have to work. but on the other hand I only stayed at home because I hate carnival. yes, I really hate it! Carnival in my city is very traditional. It´s a popular party that you don´t have to pay tfor. having fun as in Rio and São Paulo, so during carnival the city has a crowd of people and I don´t like crowds. I spend my free time watching films and surfing on the internet. I also want to say to you that carnival it´s a violent party. some people only make mess. and It´s really sad when a tourist come to Brazil and die. It´s only a tip!!

My Carnival

My Carnival was good because I didn't have to work. On the other hand I stayed at home because I hate Carnival. Yes, I really hate it! Carnival in my city is very traditional. It's a popular party that you don't have to pay for. So during Carnival the city is crowded and I don't like crowds. I spend my free time watching films and surfing the internet. I also want to say to you that Carnival is a violent party. Some people only make a mess. It's really sad when a tourist dies in Brazil during Carnival. It's only a trip!