Are these English sentences correct?
من همیشه منتظر شنیدن صدات بودم ولی تنها چیزی که گیرم اومد ناامیدی بود
I had always been waiting for hearing your voice but the only thing I got, was disappointment
این سکوت و این تنهایی یه دلیله برای نابود کردن قلب من
This silence and loneliness are reasons for destroying my heart
By the way they are from a story.
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Are these English sentences correct?
من همیشه منتظر شنیدن صدات بودم ولی تنها چیزی که گیرم اومد ناامیدی بود
I had always been waiting to hear your voice but the only thing I got, was disappointment
این سکوت و این تنهایی یه دلیله برای نابود کردن قلب من
This silence and loneliness are reasons to destroy my heart /These silence and lonelines are means to destroy my heart./these silence and lonliness can make my heart destroyed! :S or you can simly use " break my heart.
By the way they are from a story.
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Are these English sentences correct?
من همیشه منتظر شنیدن صدات بودم ولی تنها چیزی که گیرم اومد ناامیدی بود
I had always been waiting to hear your voice but the only thing I got was disappointment
این سکوت و این تنهایی یه دلیله برای نابود کردن قلب من
This silence and loneliness are means to destroy my heart
By the way they are from a story.
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I don't mean if the English ones are correct. I meant "did I translate them correctly to English from Farsi or not"
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It is Persian / Farsi. I wanted to see if I translated them correctly from Farsi to English.
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these English sentences are correct
but what is the other language?
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