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美凤蝶和黑鳳蝶很像 美凤蝶和黑鳳蝶很像,不是它没有翅膀后边儿的突起。日本里,南边比北边在多。这淡路岛里,它经常被看到。 Great mormon is similar with spangle, but it doesn't have tail's projections. In the case of Japan, it ranges more in the southern parts. Here Awaji island, it is often looked.

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美凤蝶和黑鳳蝶很像

美凤蝶和黑鳳蝶很像,只不是它(which one do you mean?美凤蝶or黑鳳蝶 )没有翅膀后边儿的突起。在日本里,南边比北边在多。在这淡路岛上里,它经常被看到(Its not wrong here,and you can also say : 经常可以看到它们的身影)。

Great mormon is similar with spangle, but it doesn't have tail's projections. In the case of Japan, it ranges more in the southern parts. Here Awaji island, it is often looked.
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美凤蝶和黑鳳蝶很像

美凤蝶和黑鳳蝶很像,只是(但是,不过)它没有翅膀后边的突起。在日本,南边比北边多。在(这)淡路岛,(它经常被看到)经常可以看到(它)。

Great mormon is similar with spangle, but it doesn't have tail's projections. In the case of Japan, it ranges more in the southern parts. Here Awaji island, it is often looked.
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美凤蝶和黑鳳蝶很像

美凤蝶和黑鳳蝶很像,不是它没有翅膀后边儿的突起。日本里,南边比北边在多。这淡路岛里,也经常能看到它。
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hiromi,i haven't seen you for a long time ,how are you ? the composition you write today is ok ,but there is one sentence i do not know what do you want to express ,both confuse me in chinese and englush "南边比北边在多""it ranges more in the southern parts"what is the meaning ?you mean the amount of mormon in south is larger tha that of in north ? i am puzzled.
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