Correct please my tale :)
I like valentine's day. Not long ago I had a site about love and romance :) I was writing articles about this sweet feeling, preparing romantic articles and I also was writing about possible romantic surprises. Over 2000 people were visiting it every day. It was interesting time.
But now i'm interested in programming and my romantic soul is put to sleep by analytic brain :)
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Hello Tanya_K. How are you?
Correct please my tale :)
I like valentine's day. Not long ago I had a site about love and romance :)
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I was writing articles about this sweet feeling, preparing romantic articles and I also was writing about possible romantic surprises. Over 2000 people were visiting it every day. It was AN interesting time.
But now i'm [I'm] interested in programming and my romantic soul is put to sleep by analytic brain :) [Remove the emoticon please. For serious communication, you do not want to suggest to the reading public, that you are trying to be cute all the time.
Just publish your message in clear English and leave it at that.]
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It is a competent essay. Nicely done Tanya.---Warm Regards, Bruce
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Well here it is extra remarkable since we have large greenhouse sector producing flowers, and we never did anything about Valentines day say, 30 years ago, when I was a teenager. So for me it's just a sales trick.
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I have to agree with Markus and Tanya. I think it is kind of a stupid holiday. You should do nice things for your loved one everyday. And there is no reason why there should be a holiday for it. I am against the complete commercialization of Valentines day. Gives it no validity.
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Markus, I think it's just an additional reason to make something pleasant to your loved one. And it doesn't matter who invented this holiday at first. And it's no needed to buy flowers, just create nice athmosphere )
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I hate valentines day. It's an Anglo-Saxon tradition that was not celebrated here until the Dutch flower industry saw a market in it, and started to push it down our throats.
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