International party

I want to make friends with foreigners (especially English speakers) in real life, so I searched an international party on the internet. Luckily I found a party that will be held this weekend in Roppongi. I have visited a similar party in the past, but I could not speak English well. I may have been shy. I want to do better this time.

Of course, I don't expect to only improve my English, I am interested in other countries' cultures and ways of thinking. I'm looking forward to meet many people.

Have you ever joined such a party?

International Party

[Nothing wronge per se, but we usually capitalize the words in our titles]

I want to make friends with foreigners (especially English speakers) in real live, so I searched for an international party on the internet. Luckily I found a party that will be held on this weekend at Roppongi. I have joined a similar party before, but I could not speak English well then. I may have been too shy. I want to do better this time.

Of course, I don't expect to only improve my English. I am interested in other countries' cultures and ways of thinking. I'm looking forward to meeting many people.

Have you joined such a party?

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Other than a few plural agreements ("cultures" instead of "culture", etc) this was really well done! I myself have not joined such a party before, but I would definitely be interested in one.

International party

I want to make friendship with foreigners (especially English speaker) in real livelife. So I searched for an international party on the internet. Luckily I found the party that will be held on this weekend at Roppongi. I have joined the similar party, but I could not speak English well. I may have been shy. But I want to do better this time.

Of course, I don't expect to only improve my English but, I am interested in other country's culture and the way of thinking. I'm looking forward to meet many people.

Have you ever joined such a party?