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Hello there! I really enjoyed reading your journal entry, you are a great writer! :D
You did make a few mistakes, but it was very easy to understand you.
Rock Dove loves you
Let me tell you something about pigeons, or columba livia if you want to sound like a nerd.
People are well acquainted with this little fatty bird, which is always crossing the street with his tiny feet. He could just fly away so that you could avoid swerving ( "s-turn" if you're nice and "pass-over-turn" if you're evil).
São Paulo, Brazil (where I live), has many of them. The main reason is that Portuguese Royalty wanted Brazil to look like Paris; full of beautiful fluffy white pigeons. The problem started after releasing pigeons to the city; it started a massive resident evil pigeon infestation. The government started imposing a new law to reward anyone who "hunted" more pigeons. Oh well, good everything was then resolved, right? NO. People started raising pigeons in their house to sell them afterward. And that's why there's so many pigeons in São Paulo.
Well played Brazil, Rock Dove loves you <3
Great job, and keep practicing! :)
Erik~
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