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Сloning People all over the world argue if human cloning research should be allowed. In my opinion, human cloning experiments are very dangerous because there are huge risks of abnormal behavior of human clones. If clones have been made, they will have serious psychological problems connected with their unusual birth. Human cloning can change our idea of values of the human life. Scientists think that human cloning could be very useful because it would help against serious deseases like AIDS or cancer. Also cloning will be a chance for parents who can't give birth to a child an opportunity to have children. Some clones can be useful to test the new medicine before people will use them. I am afraid that this technology is not safe enough to use on humans. And our society is not well prepared for this invention. I think cloning isn't worth to do or it must be under the special control.

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Сloning

People all over the world argue if human cloning research should be allowed. In my opinion, human cloning experiments are very dangerous because there are huge risks of abnormal behavior of human clones. Such as, if clones have been made, they will have serious psychological problems connected with their unusual birth. Human cloning can change how we our idea of values of the human life. On the other hand, scientists think that human cloning could be very useful because it wcould help against serious diseases like AIDS or cancer. Also cloning will be a chance for parents who can't give birth to a child an opportunity to have children. Some clones can be useful to when testing the new medicine before people will use them. Despite the benefits, I am afraid that this technology is not safe enough to use on humans. And I also believe that our society is not well prepared for this invention scientific/genetic advancement. Personally, I think cloning isn't worth to doing.  If cloning has to be done, it must be under the with the strictest of special controls.

 

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- I like the writing and topic (very controversial!)

- Suggestion, because you said "there are huge risks" (risks = plural), I would expect more than one example (you said = If clones have been made, they will have serious psychological problems), that's why I amended the sentence with a lead-in that says "such as" (representing 1 example of a huge risk)

- changed would to could, because would implies that cloning WILL definitely help, vs could which would imply that cloning MAY help

 

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