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I love the Spring Festival but i am so tired now three days ago,was the SpringFestival,the most important festival for our chinese.on Chinese New Year's Eve,we watched The Spring Festival Gala and stay up late,oh,i like this year‘s the Spring Festival Gala,especially some wonderful performence which incloud western and chinese culture.we ate dumpling, weared new clothes, touch off the firecracker, paid new year call with other people. visit relatives...so many things to deal with.today,i went to the railway station ,because 22th i would back to school,i have to buy a train ticket for myself.you know,inChina,It is very difficult to buy train tickets,you have to buy 20 days in advance and today is 12th,i am later.so the seat had been sold out,only the standing-room ticket.ohhhhhh,so terrible.I hate transport during the Spring Festival:(i walked a long way and i am so tired now...

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I love the Spring Festival but I am so tired now.

Three days ago_was the Spring Festival, the most important festival for us Chinese. On Chinese New Year's Eve, we watched The Spring Festival Gala and stayed up late. Oh, I liked this year‘s the Spring Festival Gala, especially some wonderful performences which include Western and Chinese culture. We ate dumplings, wore new clothes, touched off the firecrackers, paid new year calls with other people, visited relatives. So many things to deal with. Today, I went to the railway station_because on the 22nd I will go back to school. I have to buy a train ticket for myself. You know_in China, it is very difficult to buy train tickets, you have to buy them 20 days in advance and today is the 12th. I am late, so the seats have been sold out, only the standing-room tickets were available Oh, so terrible. I hate transport during the Spring Festival. :( I walked a long way and I am so tired now.

 

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