Friendship

It is being there forever, through the good and the bad, no matter who comes between you. A friend persuades you to do good things, to care, respect, and trust each other forever. Your friend should feel like your brother or your sister. You should be able to tell your friend everything and go to your friend for anything. Friendship is about getting each other out of sticky situations and sticking by your friends side, no matter what or who comes between you. A friend doesn't want to force you to do something wrong. A real friend advise you about mistakes. A friend wants permit you to be a better man everyday
All friends get into fights with each other. A fake friend would just ignore you. A real friend would strive to try to convince you to fix the fight. Everyone has problems, a fake friend would say "ask someone else", but a real friend would stay up with you all night to solve the problem.

[Very good.  Since most of the writing was in the second person, all of it should use the second person (you).]