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新年快乐! 新年快乐! 大家好久不见,近来还好吗?? 元旦那天,我和我的家人一起去了横滨中华街吃饭。 所以那天是星期天和长周末中中间的一天,那里特别热闹。 我买了一块重庆饭店的"番饼"。 它味道像月饼,真好吃。 每次路过横滨中华街都买。 -------------------------------- Happy Chinese New Year! Long time no see, how have you been? On the New Year's Day, I went to Yokohama China town for dinner with my family. Because it was Sunday and just a middle day of long weekend, the town was so crowded. I bought a piece of chungking restaurant's "fan bing". It just tastes like "yue bing", and it's very good. I always buy this cake when I visit Yokohama China Town.

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新年快乐!

大家新年快乐!
好久不见,近来还好吗??

元旦那天,我和我的家人一起去了横滨中华街吃饭。
因为那天是星期天,也是长周末中中间一天,因此那里特别热闹。

在那里,我买了一块重庆饭店的"番饼"。
吃起来味道像月饼,很好吃。
以后路过横滨中华街都去买。

 

 

这样修改后就比较清楚、连贯了,加油哦,力挺你
 

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Happy Chinese New Year!
Long time no see, how have you been?

On the New Year's Day, I went to Yokohama China town for dinner with my family.
Because it was Sunday and just a middle day of long weekend, the town was so crowded.

I bought a piece of chungking restaurant's "fan bing".
It just tastes like "yue bing", and it's very good.
I always buy this cake when I visit Yokohama China Town.

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新年快乐!

新年快乐!
大家好久不见,近来还好吗??

元旦那天,我和我的家人一起去了横滨唐人街吃饭。
因为那天是星期天和长周末中中间的一天,那里特别热闹。

我买了一块重庆饭店的"番饼"。
它味道像月饼,真好吃。
我每次路过横滨唐人街都会买。


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Happy Chinese New Year!
Long time no see, how have you been?

On the New Year's Day, I went to Yokohama China town for dinner with my family.
Because it was Sunday and just the middle of a long weekend, the town was so crowded.

I bought a piece of chungking restaurant's "fan bing".
It just tastes like "mooncake", and it's very delicious.
I always buy this cake when I visit Yokohama China Town.

 

中文跟英文都很棒。

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过年好!
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新年快乐!

新年快乐!
大家好久不见,近来还好吗??

元旦那天,我和我的家人一起去了横滨中华街吃饭。
因为那天是星期天和长周末中中间的一天,所以那里特别热闹。

我买了一块重庆饭店的"番饼"。
它味道像月饼,真好吃。
每次路过横滨中华街都买。


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Happy Chinese New Year!
Long time no see, how have you been?

On the New Year's Day, I went to Yokohama China town for dinner with my family.
Because it was Sunday and just a middle day of long weekend, the town was so crowded.

I bought a piece of chungking restaurant's "fan bing".
It just tastes like "yue bing", and it's very good.
I always buy this cake when I visit Yokohama China Town.

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明けましておめでとう。原来横滨也有中华街. 我从来没有吃过"番饼“。看来不错。我去找一找。呵呵

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