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First notebook entry: Introducing myself im university student. i live in okinawa in japan. its a really beautiful place :) there are many nice beach. i like here. and my major in international relations. especially,i studied american military strategy. but im absent from university now. and i've been phillipines to study and work as intership. i came back here just 2 weeks ago.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm a university student.
I live in Okinawa in Japan.
It's a really beautiful place :)
There are many nice beaches.
(1) I like it here.
I have a and my major in international relations.
I especially especially,i studied American military strategy.
But I'm absent from university now.
(2) And I've been to the Phillipines to study and work (3) as an intern. intership.
I came back here just 2 weeks ago.

 

Note:

I am -> I'm

It is -> It's

i -> I

okinawa -> Okinawa

japan -> Japan

 

(1) it means "I like being here" or the experience of being in Okinawa. "I like here" isn't wrong but it sounds better to say "I like it here." :)

 

(2) You can also say: "...absent from university now because I went to the Phillipines to study..."

 

(3) "work as an intern." OR "work for an internship."

 

 Great job! がんばってね :) 

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はじめまして わたくしわ レアンドル です ブラジル から来ました わたくしの母語わ伯「ブラジル」ポルトガル語です どうぞ よろしく おねがいたします ぐすーよー はじみてい うがなびら わん ねー レアンドル やいびーん ブラジル からちゃーびたん ゆたさるぐとう うにげーさびら
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Your English is very good. Much better than my Japanese. One thing you will notice is that in English, we use a "capital" letter to start sentences, and when the word is a proper noun. (like a title, or a place) For example "japan" should be "Japan". Also, we always capitalize the word "I". I look forward to helping you more.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm a university student. 
I live in Okinawa, Japan.
It's a really beautiful place. :)
There are many nice beaches. 
I like it here.
My major is in International Relations.
Especially, I studied american military strategy.
I'm not attending university now, because i've been in the Phillipines to study and work at an internship. (or as an intern) 
I came back here just 2 weeks ago.

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