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Should I take the job?
I'm looking for a new job. Several days ago, one of my relatives recommended I take a job as a sales associate in an infocommunications company. The good thing about this job is that I can make more money by doing this than in my previous position. (Is this what you mean?) Another good thing is that I can get to know more people, and that's what I want. However, with this job, I will have to have much social interaction.
I'm very confused now.
Very good, Larita. I was not sure if your relative recommended you for the job, or if your relative recommended you take the job.
Should I Take the Job?
I'm looking for a new job. Several days ago one of my relatives recommended that I take a job as doing something associated with selling in an infocommunications company. The good thing about this job is that I can make more money by doing this. Another good thing is that I can know more people, and that's what I want. However, with this job, I have to have too much social interaction.
I'm very confused now.
Corrections in red.
Suggestions in blue.
Should I take the job?
I'm looking for a new job. Several days ago, one of my relatives recommended me to take the a job as doing something associated with saling sales in an infocommunications company. The good thing of about this job is that I can make more money by doing this. Another good thing is that I can know meet more people, and that's what I want. However, with this job, With this job, however, I have to have too much social intercourse will have to be very social.
I'm This makes me very confused now.
A few notes:
The word 'intercourse' is generally not used that much in common speech as it is more often than not referring to sexual intercourse. Just a tip. o.o
I added a few stylistic suggestions (in blue) in the last couple sentences, but what you had written is also fine!
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