Happy New Year

Hi everybody. Happy New Year! Spring Festival is the one of the most popular festivals in China. I like this festival because I can get some pocket money*. I really enjoy these days because and it symbolizes means I will have a great beginning.
Here, I hope you all are happy every day! Happy New Year!

*Do you mean "红包" (red pocket/envelope) or do you actually mean pocket money? Pocket money is like the change you have left over in your pocket after making several purchases throughout the day. So when someone hears pocket money, they think of a small amount of cash. 

Happy New Year

Hi, everybody. Happy new year!Spring Festival is the one of the most popular festivals in China. I like this festival because I can get pocket money. I really enjoy the days and it means I will have a great beginning.
Here, I hope you all are happy every day! Happy new year!

[Very good.  Always put a space after periods and commas when you write. 新年快乐！]