about my home town

I was born in Tehran.Tehran is a big and crowded city. It is Iran's capital.
Everyone who lives in Tehran know more information, perhaps but Tehran is more developed as other city.
Bazar, it's an interesing place and  great a tourist attractive. I think more most of the people dont know about Bazar.
Bazar is a place where is a lot of shops and seller great business point. You could visit every special shop with special rates that are sell cheeper.
I could not explain it just with a note, but it you needs to visit. I invite you to travel here like IRAN,TEHRAN & BAZAR.

Have fun

About my home town

I was born in Tehran. Tehran is a big and crowded city. It's Iran's capital.
Everyone who lives in Tehran know more information, perhaps but Tehran is more developed as other city.
The Bazaar is an ineresing place, a great tourist attraction. I think many people don't know about Bazar.
Bazaar is a place where are a lot of shops and sellers. You could visit every special shops that sell cheaper.
I could not explain it just with note , you need to visit it. I invite you to travel here.
IRAN,TEHRAN,BAZZAR...
Have fun

[Good work.  You make small mistakes, but your meaning is clear and you have the basics.]