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Happy new year Today is the Eve of spring festival.I got up early to prepare for big dinner with my families，actually，we have bought a lot of things and done them yesterday.we pasted couplets and had a great house cleaning.I am very excited now，our familes can stay together to have family reunion dinner.we went to haizhu square to take a lot of photoes after dinner.we will watch Spring Festival Gala Evening at pm7:30 untill pm12:00,which we called 守岁，then we will play a lot of fireworks to celebrate the coming of new year，of course we can recieve the red pocket from my parents. we can not sleep until am 3:00.I am looking forward to have a good Spring Festival Gala .Happy new year to everybody.

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Happy New Year

Today is the Eve of spring festival. I got up early to prepare for a big dinner with my families，actually. We have bought a lot of things and done prepared them yesterday. We pasted couplets and had a great house cleaning. I am very excited now that our familes can stay together to have for a family reunion dinner. We went to Haizhu square to take a lot of photoes after dinner. We will watch the Spring Festival Gala Evening at pm7:30pm untill pm12:00am, which we called 守岁，Then we will playwatch a lot of fireworks to celebrate the coming of the new year. Of course we can recieve the red pocket from my parents. We cannot sleep until am 3:00am. I am looking forward to having a good Spring Festival Gala. Happy New Year to everyone.

 

You should write 12:00am not pm. It changes to "am" and is considered morning time after midnight has struck. Keep up the good work! You have good ideas. The main problem is punctuation. 坚持不懈

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你住在广州？ 我在广州两年住了。..... I can tell because you said Haizhu Square.... A few corrections "family" (not families), photos (not photoes)..... don't forget to mention about the oranges. 新年快乐!! 过年好！ Alex
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" can not [cannot?] sleep until am 3:00." It is required for you to stay awake till 3:00 AM OR I will likely stay up till at least 3:00 AM...means not required to stay up, but want to stay up.

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