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Swaying on the meadow There was a terrible noise of a flock of paradise birds outside the window,, a swarm of bees, a drove of sheep and etc. These all completely woke me up in the middle of night. "Okay you really caught my attention" I got out of bed quickly and went to look out of the window. As I looked I saw so much grass outside. That was pretty shock of me to see the truth that my garden had changed to be a MEADOW! "Geez, I could swear I'm still in my dream." "No pall, this is realistic" A queen bee suddenly told me that I had just arrived in a narrow region of wonderland. I stepped my foot to leave my room. Then, I asked the queen bee what actually made me here. She replied: "You seemed exhausted, so I brought you here." I saw a swing under the tree, the tree grown by not merely the melancholic flowers but even the polka dot leaves. Well, I should say that I succumbed to temptation to sway it vigorously. a loony writing written by a loony writer. best regards, Yan Bastian

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Swaying on the meadow

There was a terrible noise of from flock of paradise birds outside the window, a swarm of bees, a drove of sheep and etc. These all completely woke me up in the middle of night.
"Okay, you really caught my attention"
I got out of bed quickly and went to look out of the window. As I looked, I saw so much grass outside. That was pretty big shock to me to see the truth that my garden had changed into a MEADOW!
"Geez, I could swear I'm still in my dream."
"No pal, this is real"
A queen bee suddenly told me that I had just arrived in a narrow region of Wonderland. I took a step my foot to leave my room. Then,I asked the queen bee what actually brought me here. She replied:
"You seemed exhausted, so I brought you here."
I saw a swing under the tree - the tree grown by not merely the melancholic flowers but even the polka dot leaves. Well, I should say that I succumbed to temptation to sway it vigorously.

A loony writing written by a loony writer.
Best regards,

Yan Bastian

 

[Good work.  Sweet dreams.  ;-)]

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