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Swaying on the meadow
There was a terrible noise of from flock of paradise birds outside the window, a swarm of bees, a drove of sheep and etc. These all completely woke me up in the middle of night.
"Okay, you really caught my attention"
I got out of bed quickly and went to look out of the window. As I looked, I saw so much grass outside. That was pretty big shock to me to see the truth that my garden had changed into a MEADOW!
"Geez, I could swear I'm still in my dream."
"No pal, this is real"
A queen bee suddenly told me that I had just arrived in a narrow region of Wonderland. I took a step my foot to leave my room. Then,I asked the queen bee what actually brought me here. She replied:
"You seemed exhausted, so I brought you here."
I saw a swing under the tree - the tree grown by not merely the melancholic flowers but even the polka dot leaves. Well, I should say that I succumbed to temptation to sway it vigorously.
A loony writing written by a loony writer.
Best regards,
Yan Bastian
[Good work. Sweet dreams. ;-)]
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