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The Future Plan In the future, I want to take a trip to different ancient towns from all over the world. At present, more and more ancient ruins increasingly commercialize. They already lose their original culture. So before the extinction of them, I hope that I can use camera to record unique landscape and feel primitive atmosphere. First of all, I will collect lots of related datas about them and take China as a first step. In order to accomplish this plan, I think the most important is that I ought to strengthen my physical, then I need to reserve a great deal of knowledge about ruins. One day, if I have an opportunity to achieve them, I will feel a sense of achievement.

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The Future Plan

In the future, I want to take a trip to different ancient towns from all over the world. At present, more and more ancient ruins are increasingly commercialized. They have already lost their original culture. So before they become extinct of them, I hope that I can use a camera to record unique landscapes and feel the primitive atmosphere.

First of all, I will collect lots of related datas about them and take China as a first step. In order to accomplish this plan, I think the most important is that I ought to strengthen myself physically, then I need to reserve obtain a great deal of knowledge about ruins.

One day, if I have an opportunity to achieve these goals, I will feel a sense of achievement.

 

[Good work.  I wish you good luck.  I live in a city where they are much to quick to tear down old buildings, so I know how you feel.]

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All of us have our own plan or plans ,then the final thing wo should do is to achieve it even them.I agree with your opinion .Come on ! Good luck!

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