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My dreams Today I want to talk with my dreams at here,my dream is to be a cabin crew of foreign airlines,whatever which foreign airlines company I'd like to do it.Possible someone has a problem ask me.Why you are want to be an foreign airlines cabin crew?The reason is I'd like to travel around the world and to study more and more foreign languages,make more and more foreign friends.I think that is a pretty meaningful things to my future life.I believe that is a memorable experience to me.I think I could complete my dream in the near future.Although my english spoken is not very fluent,but I can work hard to study english every day,but I don't know the best way to study english,so I need a froeign friend to study exchange our language to learn and help each other.I will take part in an interview in this summer after I graduated,I will succeed,it must succeed!O(∩_∩)O~

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   Hello Grace:

 

     Nice essay about your goal.  You might write it this way:

 

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My dreams

Today I want to talk   about my dream.   My dream is to be a  crew member  for a  foreign airlines.   I have not decided  which foreign airlines company I'd like to do it with.       Possibly,  someone   would have a problem and ask me for assistance.

 

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    You may ask;   "Why  do you want to work  as a crew member for a  foreign airline?    The reason is,    I would like to travel around the world and to study foreign languages,  and also  make  foreign friends.

I think that is a pretty [use   "very" instead of "pretty"]  meaningful thing to do with my future.

 

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This would be a   memorable experience for me. 

I think I  can accomplish my dream in the near future.

Although my spoken English  is not very fluent,  I can work hard to study English every day.   I don't know the best way to study english, so I need a foreign friend to study exchange our languages to learn and help each other.

 

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I will take part in an interview  this summer after I graduate.

I will succeed.  I must   succeed!"

 

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 This is a most excellent  goal and a good account of  your purposes.

 

  May I suggest that you practice learning some English songs and study their vocabularly to assist you in   phrasing your sentences?  I always start my students out with a song by  Carol King,  titled  "You've Got A Friend".  You can listen to a video performance of the song, and others also, to acquire  a   good English pronunciation and   also, this will help you with the structuring of your own sentences.  Nice to meet you. ---Warm Regards,  Bruce

 

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