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Hello Grace:
Nice essay about your goal. You might write it this way:
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My dreams
Today I want to talk about my dream. My dream is to be a crew member for a foreign airlines. I have not decided which foreign airlines company I'd like to do it with. Possibly, someone would have a problem and ask me for assistance.
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You may ask; "Why do you want to work as a crew member for a foreign airline? The reason is, I would like to travel around the world and to study foreign languages, and also make foreign friends.
I think that is a pretty [use "very" instead of "pretty"] meaningful thing to do with my future.
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This would be a memorable experience for me.
I think I can accomplish my dream in the near future.
Although my spoken English is not very fluent, I can work hard to study English every day. I don't know the best way to study english, so I need a foreign friend to study exchange our languages to learn and help each other.
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I will take part in an interview this summer after I graduate.
I will succeed. I must succeed!"
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This is a most excellent goal and a good account of your purposes.
May I suggest that you practice learning some English songs and study their vocabularly to assist you in phrasing your sentences? I always start my students out with a song by Carol King, titled "You've Got A Friend". You can listen to a video performance of the song, and others also, to acquire a good English pronunciation and also, this will help you with the structuring of your own sentences. Nice to meet you. ---Warm Regards, Bruce
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