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find and correct the errors,thanks! Good afternoon everyone! It's my great pleasure to have thie short English speech with all of you. Today, the topic what i want to share is that Another Person In Our Innermost. Things like this always happened. A teacher's hobby is rock, but on the contrary, a rocker is prefer a quiet working atmosphere. Everyone always is eager for something in their heart of hearts. So do i. I like driving and travelling Once when i hold the steering wheel, i can go anywhere whatever i like. Expeciallu in a peaceful, sunny day,the wind is gentle and the sun radiant, i can drive freely with the sweet music. All of that make me feel pretty good. I like travelling as much as driving. I want to visit Austria, Franch, USA, Korea, Japan and so on. Every country and every place have attracted me. Or ican say so, I want to travell all over the world. The famous scenery spot isn't my only purpose. I want to really understand the place that i visit. I want to know more about the culture custom and the lifestyle of the local person. But as we all known, travelling with a tour group isn't a good choice for us. It's just a concept of light visit. So if u want to be truly experience the local manners and feelings,maybe the self-travel is your best choice. And it's my best choice too, i like self-travel the most. The better situation is that i got a international driving permit that i can drive in forign country. I thought it must would be a wonderful journey. But if i want to have such a wonderful forign journey, i thought except for the sufficient funds, the first step i need to do is learning english well. Right? That's all what i want to share. I hope all of you have had fun in the past 3 mintues. Thanks for listenning.

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find and correct the errors,thanks!

Good afternoon everyone! It's my great pleasure to give this short speech to you all in English speech with all of you. Today, the topic what I want to share is that Other Person within each of us.

Things like this always happened all the time. A certain teacher's hobby is rock music, but on the contrary other hand, a rocker musician is prefers a quiet working atmosphere. Everyone is always is eager for something in their heart of hearts. So do i It is the same for me. I like driving and travelling. Once when I get hold of the steering wheel, i can go anywhere and do whatever I like.  Expeciallu in On a peaceful, sunny day especially, when the wind is gentle and the sun is shining, I can drive freely, listening to with the sweet music. All of that makes me feel pretty good. I like travelling as much as driving. I want to visit Austria, France, USA, Korea, Japan and many other countries. Every country and every place have is attractive to me. Or ican say so I could simply say, I want to travell all over the World. Seeing famous scenery spots isn't my only purpose. I want to really understand the place that I visit. I want to know more about the culture, the custom and the lifestyle of the local people. But as we all known, travelling with a tour group isn't a good choice for us. It's just a concept of light visit. So if you want to be truly experience the local manners and feelings, maybe the independent travel is your best choice. And it's my best choice too; I like independent  travel the most. The best option  is for me to get an international driving permit so that i can drive in foreign countries. I tthink it must would surely be a wonderful journey. But if i want to have such a wonderful foreign journey, I thought that, apart from having sufficient funds, the first step I need to take is to learning english well. Right? That's all what i wish to share with you today. I hope you all of you have had fun in enjoyed the last 3 mintues. Thanks for listenning.

Sorry, cee u, but it was very difficult to correct your passage so that it makes sense without making quite a lot of changes.  I think you need to look at each sentence quite carefully, so that you understand it properly before trying to give your speech.  Otherwise, just repeating what I have written will not advance your learning very much.
I hope you do it well, and I wish you good luck :)

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