2012 and crop circles
Some time ago, I read an article about the relationships between crop circles and 2012 doomsday. The most convinced evidence is that one of the latest crop circles displayed the planets in solar system. As you know, the position of the planets is different in different time. It is also unique in a certain time period. In that crop circle, the position of planets points to a time: Dec 21 of 2012. As you may know, that the last day in Mayan calendar.
It's an interesting topic so I had a research on it. I read several other articles about crop circles. One circles displays circumference ratio and some others display geometric drawings. They're accurate and nobody can explain it. Who made it? What's the real meaning? Some authors consider the crop circles as the signals that extraterrestrial intelligence gave us. They may want to communicate with earthmen or they want to give us a warning.
There is a video made by German. It collected many crop circles and tried to translate the circles. You may search and have a look on it. It's interesting and amazing.
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Thanks for your professional corrections. They really helped me a lot. I will pay attention to them.
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- "some time ago" or "a while ago"
- "the crop circle below" - if you have an image that you are reffering to you can put "the...below/above/in the right/in the left", or whatever..
- regarding dates, if its 1 December , you write it 1st December but you read it First OF December. It aplies for 21 also : "21st December" , read: Twenty First OF December !
2 May is written: 2nd May and read: Second OF May
3 October written: 3rd October and read: Third OF October
4 June written: 4th June and read: FourTH OF June
Except 1, 2 and 3 , the rest of the dates are wrote with TH at the end
(the months were picked randomly as an example)
-Reffering to the circles you can avoid repetition in the sentences by using personal pronouns : "them" in this case.
-"They're accurate and nobody can explain them. Who made them?" You wrote "it" and i corrected it as "them" because you are reffering to circleS and you need to keep the subject on plural form.
- "They may have wanted to communicate" ... i corrected it as "have wanted" because its an action in the past . The circles were made in the past and the action is finnished.
- when you write "german" alone it means "german language" . You were talking about a person that was studying these circled!
- "collected" was wrong because you cant physically collect them from the ground :P but you CAN collect evidence, information, and so on.
- "have a look at it" how i corrected it is correct but i dont think is the good choice for that sentence.
But anyway, keep up the good work. You need to work on rephrasing ;)
And a last thing : if you begin the phrase with a certain verb tense, try to keep it to the end :)
Diana
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2012 and crop circles
Some time ago, I read an article about the relationshipIt's an interesting topic so I had a research on it. I read several other articles about crop circles. Some of them display circumference ratio and some others display geometric drawings. They're accurate and nobody can explain them. Who made them? What's the real meaning? Some authors consider the crop circles as the signals that extraterrestrial intelligence gave us. They may have wanted to communicate with us or
There is a video made by a German (researcher?) .
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Please help me correct my English mistakes. Thanks.
Maybe people from UK have more information about the crop circles. Share it if possible. :)
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