First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English,because I want to make friends from the USA (I dream to visit this country or maybe I want to work there in the a near future) [maybe you want ? do you want to or not ? When you say that it seems like you are not sure if you want to work there or not. Maybe you should say: I might work there in a near future...] 
My native language is Russian, and I grew up in Moscow.
I enjoy tennis, good cinema movies,walking hanging out with my friends,partying,bars,traveling and so on...

Good luck !

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English,because I want to make friends from another countries(I dream to visit all countries in the world) And I am really fond of English)
My native language is Russion, and I grew up in Moscow. I'll glad to teach you Russian.
I enjoy tennis,good cinema,walking with my friends,partying,bars,traveling and so on...

So,my future friends, I  look forward to you ,)