About my disadvantage
Sometimes I'm very lazy:( For example, I had decided to go in for sport everyday. I was full of enthusiasm. But 3 days went.. And I didn't want nothing. Or at the university ... I do any homeworks when I must give it to the teacher already! At the last moment. Or learning English... Sometimes I learn English every day...but then.... I don't know how yo explain it.. I don't want nothing. I want only do nothing... That's not good:( I try to become better.
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Hello Elena. How are you?
Let's look at your essay, shall we? I would like to write some improvements in punctuation and the terms, okay?
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About my disadvantage
Sometimes I'm very lazy. For example, I had decided to go in for sport everyday.
I was full of enthusiasm; But 3 days went by, and I did nothing.
At the university I do any homeworks when I must give it to the teacher already!
[Did you want to say that; "I did not do any homework when I must give it to the teacher"? You could write this part this way:
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"At the university I did not do any homework, even though it was past due, and I was supposed to turn it in to the teacher. It is already the last moment, and it is not done!"
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About learning English; sometimes I learn [or study] English every day; but then, I don't know how to explain it. I have no ambition for anything [or to accomplish anything] I don't want anything. I want only to do nothing. That's not good. I will try to become better."
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Okay, this is the essence that you wish to communicate, and I sympathize with your dilemma. It is not uncommon to feel this way in winter.
May I suggest that you find a video of an English song and learn the words?
May I suggest one for you? If I do, do you think you could learn the words and practice singing it?
I will post another comment with the song I suggest for you.
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About my disadvantage
Sometimes I'm very lazy:( For example, I had decided to go to sport for everyday. I was full of enthusiasm. But 3 days went.. And I didn't want nothing. Or at the university ... I do any homeworks when I must give it to the teacher already! At the last moment. Or learning English... Sometimes I learn English every day...but then.... I don't know how yo explain it.. I don't want nothing. I want only do nothing... That's not good:( I try to become better.
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okay, wait a minute. I can fix this
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"California Dreamin" by "Mama's and the Papas"
@ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N-aK6JnyFmk&feature=related
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All the leaves are brown
And the sky is grey
I've been for a walk
On a winter's day
I'd be safe and warm
If I was in L.A.
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California dreaming
On such a winter's day
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Stopped into a church
I passed along the way
Well, I got down on my knees
And I pretend to pray
You know the preacher likes the cold
He knows I'm gonna stay
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California dreaming
On such a winter's day
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(music)
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All the leaves are brown
And the sky is grey
I've been for a walk
On a winter's day
If I didn't tell her
I could leave today
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California dreaming
On such a winter's day
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California dreaming
On such a winter's day.........
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Man, it sure is difficult trying to teach English!
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uh oh! That printed out as a single paragraph. Here it is, verse by verse:
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"California Dreamin" by "Mama's and the Papas"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N-aK6JnyFmk&feature=related
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All the leaves are brown
And the sky is grey
I've been for a walk
On a winter's day
I'd be safe and warm
If I was in L.A.
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California dreaming
On such a winter's day
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Stopped into a church
I passed along the way
Well, I got down on my knees
And I pretend to pray
You know the preacher likes the cold
He knows I'm gonna stay
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California dreaming
On such a winter's day
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(music)
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All the leaves are brown
And the sky is grey
I've been for a walk
On a winter's day
If I didn't tell her
I could leave today
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California dreaming
On such a winter's day
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California dreaming
On such a winter's day.........
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Here you go Elena: I think this will help you with English practice, and assist you in having a more natural experience in speaking and writing this language. Learn to express a little feeling in English, and relax. Singing the words is a natural way to express feeling, and besides that,
the words express precisely the feelings of ennui (lack of desire to do things) that you are expressing right now.
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"California Dreamin" by "Mama's and the Papas"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N-aK6JnyFmk&feature=related
All the leaves are brown
And the sky is grey
I've been for a walk
On a winter's day
I'd be safe and warm
If I was in L.A.
California dreaming
On such a winter's day
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Stopped into a church
I passed along the way
Well, I got down on my knees
And I pretend to pray
You know the preacher likes the cold
He knows I'm gonna stay
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California dreaming
On such a winter's day
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(music)
All the leaves are brown
And the sky is grey
I've been for a walk
On a winter's day
If I didn't tell her
I could leave today
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California dreaming
On such a winter's day
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California dreaming
On such a winter's day.........
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----Warm Regards, Bruce
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