The weather of beijing
last month,The beijing's weather is not well,very bad,i think everybody know through newspaper,and i am not well same of weather,i feel tired ,but i keep study enlish ,about keep study a week ,much times i want to give up study for pass IELTS,in fact i study english twenty years,but now i even don't pass chinese four level,i don't have self-confidence,this short sentence has much more error,i know ,but i don't want to give up,so everybody help me pass IELTS!
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Beijing's weather was very bad last month. I think everybody knows about this from the newspapers. I am also not very well. I feel tired but I keep on studying English, I have studied for a week (is this what you meant?) and I often want to give up my studies to pass IELTS. I’ve studied English for twenty years but now I don’t even pass Chinese four level. I don’t have the self-confidence. Short sentences have much more error but I don’t want to give up, so everybody help me pass IELTS!
-- I hope this alright. Now don’t panic, you’re doing ok! Remember your full stops at the end of a sentence otherwise it’ll read like you’re not taking a breath. Don’t give up, you’re doing well!
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