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It has been five days since i came back from the school 。The weather is annoying ，it is cloudy everyday and can freeze you die 。I guess the sun has gone to someplace which is cozy and comfortable 。
Its boring at home 。Because you cant find enough people to play basketball with and you cant talk to your best friend 。I almost don't know how cpuld i survive this one—month winter holiday 。
I am going to get in a graduate school ，as a result ，i have to learn and perfect my english 。So im going to read english book and memories words from tommorrow morning （haha ，maybe from this night will be better ）。sometime i think its ridiculous since we have spent so much time but chinese people speak so bad english 。It seems europeans whose first language is not english learn and master this language well and quickly 。
there is no doubt that chinese students are deligent ，so guess our education system needs to be reformed 。
I will write compositions often ，so i hope you guys help me to correct them 。
thanks
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It has been five days since I came back from school. The weather is annoying, since it is cloudy everyday and it's so cold you could freeze to death. I guess the sun has gone to a place where it is cozy and comfortable.
It's boring at home, because there isn't enough people to be able to basketball with and I am unable to get in touch with my best friend. I don't know how I am going to survive this winter holiday, even though it's for a month.
I will be going to a graduate school, therefore I want to improve and perfect my English.
I am going to read an English book and memorize words for tomorrow morning.
Sometimes I think it's ridiculous how we spend so much time, Chinese people doesn't speak fluently in English.
It seems Europeans whose first language is not English, learn and master this language quickly. There is no doubt that Chinese students are deligent, so I guess our education system needs to be reformed.
I will continue to write compositions, and I hope you guys can help me by correcting them.
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