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Zombie Yesterday I've met a strange man on my way to home. He walked with hobble, and his face was so strange too, with opened mouth and wide eyes. I watched him carefully and tried to go faster. He looked like walking dead from horror movie. I was so scary and run to the entrance of my house. I though he want to catch me and eat my brain! He noticed that I look at him and maybe he thought I am stupid :)) But he really was like a zombie!

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Zombie

Yesterday I've met a strange man on my way to home.
He walked with hobble, and also his face was so strange too
with his opened mouth and wide eyes.
I watched him carefully and tried to go faster.
He looked like a walking dead from a horror movie. I was so scared scary
and ran to the entrance of my house. I thought he wanted to catch me and eat my brain!
He noticed that I was looking at him and maybe he thought I was am stupid :))
But he really was like a zombie!

 

Seems your brain is safe now!Thank you for your enjoyable post.:)

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Zombie

Yesterday I've met a strange man on my way to home.
He walked with a hobble, and his face was so strange too,
with opened mouth and wide eyes.
I watched him carefully and tried to go faster.
He looked like the walking dead from a horror movie. I was so scared 
and ran to the entrance of my house. I though he wanted to catch me and eat my brain!
He noticed that I looked at him and maybe he thought I was stupid :))
But he really was like a zombie!

 

Sounds pretty freaky! D:

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Zombie

Yesterday I met a strange man on my way to home.
He walked with a hobble, and his face was strange,
with an opened mouth and wide eyes.
I watched him carefully and tried to go faster.
He looked like one of the walking dead from a horror movie. I was so scared I ran to the entrance of my house. I thought he wanted to catch me and eat my brain!
He noticed that I looked at him and maybe he thought that I was stupid :))
But he was really zombie-like!

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Nice beginning for a novel ;)
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What sinister ... Glad everything turned out well.

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