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Vicky
write about my family i love to say about this tittle i introduce my famiy myy father was a great man i still miss him. he is past away god give rest to his soul. we are six brother i am younger one.And i think younger one is most luckly with others. my elder brother is doctor after him is electrical engineer.After him work is goverment job After him is engineer and After him he done master in bussiness now he is working with a union plaing company and after him its me i done electronic engineer and now plan to do masters in abraod country. we have a joint family and we love each other and my mother visit us when she stay with one brother.we all are settle in different country and when we have vacation then all brother sister we get togather at my father house......it about my familly which i share with and i wish you all are happy with your family alway touch with you family not like birds when they big and fly settle in other direction

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Writing about my family

I love to talk about this title. I will introduce my family: My father was a great man. I still miss him. he is past away god give rest to his soul. We are six brothers. I am youngest one and I think youngest one is the most luckiest one them all. with others. My elder brother is a doctor.  After him is an electrical engineer. After him one brother works in a goverment job. After him is an engineer and the last one has done his masters in business and now he is working with a union playing company. Finally, after him it's me. I have finished my studies as an electronic engineer and now plan to do a masters in abroad, in another country. We have a joint family and we love each other. My mother visits us when she stays with one brother. We all are settled in different countries and when we have vacation then all brothers and sisters we get togather at my father's house......It is about my family, which I share with and I wish you all are happy with your family. Always keep in touch with you family - not like birds. When they are big, they and fly settle in other locatio.


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I would like to say about my family. My father was a great man and I still miss him. He has past away. God, give rest to his soul. There are six brother in my family, and I am the youngest one. And i think to be the youngest is the most luckily with others. My oldest brother is a doctor, my second brother is an electrical engineer. The next one has a government job. My forth brother is an engineer. My last but one brother, he works at MBA (he is working with a union plaing company) and after him it’s me. I have done electronic engineer and now I am planning to do masters abroad. we have a joint family and we love each other and my mother visit us when she stays with one brother. we all are settled in different countries. When we have vacation, all brothers and sisters, we get together at my father house......
This is all about my family which i wanted to share with you, and i wish you all are happy with your family. always keep in touch with you family not like birds when they big and fly to settle in other direction.

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yes anna i know i did mistakes here i also focus on these mistakes as well

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