Thank you,Eminem I want to say "thank you"to Eminem,a famous rapper.I was lazy and confused because I didn't know what i lived for.But when I listening Eminem's songs in a shop,I knowed that music was

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Thank you,Eminem I want to say "thank you"to Eminem,a famous rapper.I was lazy and confused because I didn't know what i lived for.But when I listening Eminem's songs in a shop,I knowed that music was my life. I love hip-pop,love "Lose yourself" in the music,love "Not afraid".Thank you, Eminem.You let m know I live for music,let me know how to find myself in the music. it s my homework..so help me plz!!!SOS 这是我的作业。求求大家好心帮我改一下啦！谢谢！谢谢！

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Thank you,Eminem

I want to say "thank you"to Eminem,a famous rapper.I was lazy and confused because I didn't know what i lived for(what i was living for会不会更好一点?).But when I listening to Eminem's songs in a shop（这句不太清楚你是想表达什么意思所以或许可以改为 when i once heard the songs of Eninem),I knew that music was my life. I love hip-pop,love "Lose yourself" in the music,love "Not afraid".Thank you, Eminem.You let m know (that) I live for music,let me know how to find myself in the music.

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