Write about my family
I have a strong attachment to my family that ‘s associated with my childhood. I’ve been cared by my family members since I was born. For me, it’s a peaceful place whenever I want to hide all of my sadness.
My close-knit family consists of 4 people. They are my parents, my younger sister and me. We live together in our small house with a pretty garden. My father was born in 1969. He ‘s a Pharmacist. He works in Urgo Healthcare Products Company in Ho Chi Minh City. Besides, he is a boss of some drugstores in Tien Giang province. That’s one of the reasons why he wants me to be a Pharmacist as him although I don’t like anything about Pharmacy. My father said, “I try to earn a lot of money to look after our family’s living conditions”. His words make me reflect much. In my family, I love my father best because I think he always gives us all the best things in the world. So Now I’m trying my best to study Pharmacy to make him pleased. My mother was born in 1970. She’s a teacher and she’s teaching English in a secondary school in my hometown. She’s also my first teacher taught me English. My mother is a wonderful woman in my heart. She’s also a good housewife. She takes care of my family thoughtfully. In addition, I like eating the dishes my mother cooks, such as roasted chicken, sour soup, and Chinese braised pork. The youngest member is my sister. She’s 13 years old. She’s very mischievous and intelligent. Now she’s studying in the secondary school where my mother works. For me, she ‘s both my sister and my true friend. We always share together good and bad things even our secrets.
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My father ‘s far away regularly because of his job. My sister and I must listen to my mother and always help her do the housework when he wasn’t at home. We don’t have much time to eat together. We eat together on weekend. We are free every evening. It’s time we watch TV and relax. After that, my mother goes to bed early, my sister and I do our homework then sleep. I respect every second when I’m with my family.
The fountain of affection is ever flown in our family. We have pure love and affection for one another. My parents very affectionate people. There is complete accord between my father and mother and among all of us. My father works day and night to maintain our family. He never does anything without consulting my mother. We, the children, are very serviceable to all in my family. For me, my family get a great value and they are the persons I love wholeheartedly in my whole life. In a word, my family is really a happy one. We love each other very much and expect to live together under the same roof forever.
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