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(I'm not sure if this is a part of something, but mentioning what you did before the boat stopped may prevent the beginning from seeming abrupt.)
We stopped our boat stayed under the tree for a while. We didn't go up the land because there it was wet. My friend told me that it was here is “The Heaven of the Birds”, there are many birds which nest there. Farmers near here disallow forbid people to from catching them. I seemed to heard some birds flapping, but when I stared there looked I couldn't find any birds. Only countless roots and stumps stood there as many stumps. The land was wet, might washed maybe dampened by the tides. I was thinking how can "The Heaven of the Birds" have no birds? Our boat, rowed by my friend, moved on slowly into the middle of the river.
"Bird Heaven" may be used in a more casual context. I'd have used it.
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