Chinese New Year
it is closer and closer to Chinese new year, there are only a week to the time of my return, i have bought train ticket to my hometown, i didn't come back home for half a year, i miss my parents, i bought some gifts for them, so i am looking forward to Chinese New Year.
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Chinese New Year
It is closer and closer to Chinese New Year, there is only a week to the time of my return. I have bought train ticket to my hometown. I didn't come back home for half a year, so I miss my parents. I bought some gifts for them, so i am looking forward to Chinese New Year.
[Good work. All 'I's as 我 are capitalized. Also try for shorter sentences.]
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You need to review the usage of commas. It is not correct to separate independent clauses with a comma. If you like i can give you a link for comma usage.
otherwise the writing is very good idiomatic English with some additional small mistakes.
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