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One Point I Want To Make About Something
He is sitting acorss from me and his name is Life. Decades of life, I am all grown up now. I have my own points of view, but sometimes I still get in dilimma. I truly know that we are not dealing with the simeple choice as watermelon and sesame . Reality has always overtaken us groundlessly. Well, maybe it's not groundless, it's just my way of looking at it. We all believe that the life can vary and we inevitably have to face the sudden turn of events. You can detest the unfair, but you have to accept the truth and, try your best to change the bad parts of life.You can live in trepidation, do things in vain, but you can't give up hope and being a real man.Now, coming to the realizaiton, we got it.
One Point About Something (You could also make the title something like "One Point I Want to Make About Something", which sounds a little more natural to the ear.)
He is sitting across from me and his name is Life. Decades of life. I am all grown up now. I have my own point of view viewpoints, but sometimes I am still get in a dilemmia dilimmas as well. I truly know that we are not dealing with as simple as choice as the both watermelon or and sesame as such a simple choice. The Reality has always overtaken us groundlessly which like to bail out to this world from its area. (<Not sure what you are saying here.) Well, maybe it's not groundless, it's just my way of looking at it. We all believe that the life can vary, and that we all inevitably have to inevitably face a sudden the turn of events. You can detest the unfair, but you have to accept the truth and try your best to change the bad parts of your life. You can live in trepidation, do things in vain, but you can't give up the hope and to being a real man. Now, coming to this standing in the realizaiton, we have finally got it. (Or, "we finally understand"--which I think sounds a little more natural.) Clam down, best wishes. (First, I am not sure if you mean "calm down" here, and second, this sentence seems a bit out of place with the rest of your essay.)
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