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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I'm learning english, because i want to study abroas in UK or another place also make friends. I speak spanish and be to Peru. Also speak slightly of french. I enjoy listen to music, read book and speak anothers idioms! eat icecream and going with my friends to the shoping center. ;)

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm learning English, because I (always use capital letters for the names of languages, people, and countries) want to study abroad in the UK or another place somewhere else and also make friends. I speak Spanish and be to am from Peru. I also speak slightly a bit of French. I enjoy listening to music, reading books and speaking other languages. anothers idioms! I love to eat ice cream and going with my friends to the shopping center. (in Canada and the UK we spell this "centre") ;)

Well done for your first composition.  Only some minor corrections were needed but pay attention to my comments and your writing will improve.  

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm learning English, because I want to study abroad in the UK or another place, and also to make friends. I speak spanish and be to live in Peru. I also speak slightly a little bit of French. I enjoy to listen to music, read books and speak anothers idioms other languages! I like eating ice cream and going with my friends to the shopping center with my friends. ;) (I would say "to the mall", and this order just sounds more natural)

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