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Tourism World As we know, tourism world is growing more and more nowadays. The fact that people want to travel in order to forget their daily routines, their worries... and with an only purpose: to feel comfortable with people you want to stay a few days, to discover new and amazing places you have never seen before and meeting new and interesting people. It is important to respect the environment and a country's culture, once you are visiting a place or doing a sightseeing. Another interesting thing in tourism is the opportunity of sharing your experiences /photos and saying how good was your travel in the famous social networks. Remember! Practise tourism, spend a lot of money in services and accomodation (if you want, of course) but always respect and take care of the environment.

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Tourism World

As we know, tourism world is growing more and more nowadays. The fact that people want to travel in order to forget their daily routines, their worries... and with an only purpose: to feel comfortable with people you want to stay a few days, to discover new and amazing places you have never seen before and meeting new and interesting people.
It is important to respect the environment and a country's culture, once you are visiting a place or doing a sightseeing.
Another interesting thing in tourism is the opportunity of sharing your experiences /photos and saying how good was your travel in the famous social networks.

Remember! Practise tourism, spend a lot of money in services and accomodation (if you want, of course) but always respect and take care of the environment.

 

My version (just a couple of small changes):

 

The World of Tourism

 

As we know, tourism as an industry is growing more and more nowadays. The fact is, people want to travel in order to forget their worries and daily routines... Traveling allows you to discover new and amazing places you have never seen before and to meet new and interesting people.

 

When you are visiting a place or going sightseeing, it is important to respect the environment and the country's culture.

 

Another interesting thing about traveling as a tourist is the opportunity to talk about how great your trip was and to share your experiences/photos online. 

 

Remember: Travel, spend a lot of money on services and accommodations (if you want, of course) but always respect and take care of the environment.


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Tourism World

As we know, tourism is growing more and more nowadays. People want to travel in order to forget their worries and daily routines while they are discovering new and amazing places that are hopefully filled with friendly people who are willing to introduce them to this new culture. While traveling, it is important to respect the environment and a country's culture. 
 

Remember! Enjoy yourself while traveling, spend a lot of money in services and accomodation (if you want, of course) but always respect and take care of the environment.

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Tourism World

As we know, the world of tourism is growing more and more nowadays. The fact that people want to travel in order to forget their daily routines, their worries... and with a single purpose: to feel comfortable with people you want to stay a few days, to discover new and amazing places you have never seen before and to meet new and interesting people.
It is important to respect the environment and a country's culture while you are visiting a place or sightseeing.
Another interesting thing in tourism is the opportunity of sharing your experiences /photos and saying how good your travel was in the famous social networks.

Remember! Practise tourism, spend a lot of money in services and accomodation (if you want to, of course) but always respect and take care of the environment.

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Je ne suis pas du tout d'accord avec ton affirmation, les touristes visitent beaucoup des pays pollués, voilà les examples de Valence, Madrid ou Paris, ils sont des nations très polluées et avec un grand impact écologique négative. Malgré tout ça, ils sont très visitées par les touristes et les residents.
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Les touristes ne cherchant pas vraiment à visiter des contrées polluées, le développement du tourisme mondial peut se révéler comme un encouragement à la protection de l’environnement. Les régions touristiques ont donc intérêt à préserver leurs atouts naturels, voire à les développer.

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