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My Aquarium I have to prepare myself for an English language exam which will happen in the middle of the next month. I was wondering yesterday what I could write about and my girlfriend suggested that our freshwater fish tank may be an appropriate topic. So that’ll be it. I’m hoping for corrections. I had an aquarium also when I was a child, but at that time I hadn’t enough money to build such a well-installed one. In those days my filtering was just an air pump with sponge and I didn’t even got living plants in that small tank. Today we’ve got an 84 liter tank with professional filter, heater and light. Furthermore there are fine living plants in it. When I had a plan about the installation of the aquarium my girlfriend wasn’t so excited. However she got used to it and she examines the dwellers of the tank as often as I now. Watching the stirring life in the water is the best in the morning. We wake up and cast at it to make ourselves fresh and awake. Its water always is pretty clear with which the different type of plants with their different sort of greens create such an underwater jungle sight for the observer. Our fishes aren’t so particular; there are only a little cluster of guppies and two platies. Our favourite ones are the freshwater shrimps, these spineless creatures are usually very busy and look funny in the ground as they marsh up and down on the plants and devices. Snails and snail eater snails live here as well; the first feed on organic waste and the second feed on the first for preventing form overrun the tank by its specimens. We’ve got a picture here whit the tank in the bottom of left.

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My Aquarium

I have to prepare myself for an English language exam which will happen in the middle of the next month. I was wondering yesterday what I could write about and my girlfriend suggested that our freshwater fish tank may be an appropriate topic. So that’ll be it. I’m hoping for corrections.

I had an aquarium also when I was a child, but at that time I hadn’t didn't have enough money to build such a well-installed one. Back In those days, my filtering was just an air pump with sponge and I didn’t even got have any living plants in that small tank. Today we’ve got an 84 liter tank with a professional filter, heater and light. Furthermore, there are fine living plants in it. When I had a plan about the installation of the aquarium, my girlfriend wasn’t so excited. However, she got used to it and she examines the dwellers of the tank as often as I do now.
Watching the stirring life in the water is the best in the morning. We wake up and cast at it to make ourselves fresh and awake. Its water is always is pretty clear with which the different type of plants and with their different sort of greens colors, it creates such an underwater jungle sight for the observer.
Our fishes aren’t so particular diverse- there are only a little cluster of guppies and two platies. Our favourite(only used in British English) ones are the freshwater shrimps, these spineless creatures are usually very busy and look funny in the ground as they marsh up and down on the plants and devices. Snails and snail eater snails live here as well- the first feed on organic waste, and the second feed on the first for from preventing it form from overruning the tank by its specimens.

We’ve got a picture here whit(probably typo) with the tank in the bottom of left corner.

 

Just forgot commas after your transitions! Csak egy pár volt :D

 

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