Titanic

I saw the film "Titanic" tonight this evening ("tonight" is used for the future, "I will see the film tonight" where as "this evening" can indicate the future or the past).
That's It's a so very good film. and a moving love (This doesn't make sense in English. I would suggest you say instead "It's a very good film and the love story was so moving" or "It's a very good film and the romance was so moving.").
I love Jack, I love Rose, - they were so in love.
But Jack was dead died, that's a pity. I hoped he can could live, and Rose will would marry to him, then they will have a great life, with their own children and those children who lost their parents. Jack would become a famous artist. But it's just a dream. It's a moving film I am sure. Tears fall down along my face, and I can't stop.
In the real life, I don't believe there's the same love like between Jack and Rose. I don't understand what the person are thinking (Sorry, I don't understand this sentence. Who is "the person" you are talking about?). I am looking forward the to love (better to say "looking forward to falling in love"), but I can just only meet the Mr. Right in my dreams, because I am too young, and don't know what the love is.
I must study. And forget this feel as quickly as. (Sorry, I don't understand this last sentence. Do you mean, "I must study now and quickly forget these feelings."?)

Hi Sunshine,

Great notebook entry. It looks like I made a lot of corrections, but in fact I want to compliment your English. The corrections are mainly for small errors, and I'm sure that many English speakers would understand you very well. :)