journey to the east
That is my sipirit trip.
From Urmqi to the capital of china---Beijing, about 3520km of total distances. Cross all the major city in eastern part of the ancient Silk Road,feel the most powerful traditional culture shock from chinese people.From the genuine Islam region to the home of the Confucius ,frome the center asian dance and Mukam to the Beijing Opera,such a great experence for me.
Too many things I had seen and felt in this period.At my place I have never see the sea by my eyes before(there is no city in all around the world as far from the ocean as Urmqi),but I saw it in the tianjin port.Moreover, I learned more about the culture difference between east and west.Felt lots of real living-style from local chinese society,and I spent 2 days to visit the "Forbidden City"---though There were "People mountain people sea" (huge crowds of people) at there .
In the end of the journey, I'm really enjoy this unforgetable experience.
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journey to the east
That is my sipirit trip.From Urmqi to the capital of china---Beijing, about 3520km of total distances. Cross all the major city in eastern part of the ancient Silk Road,feel the most powerful traditional culture shock from chinese people.From the genuine Islam region to the home of the Confucius ,frome the center asian dance and Mukam to the Beijing Opera,such a great experence for me.
Too many things I had seen and felt in this period.At my place I have never see the sea by my eyes before(there is no city in all around the world as far from the ocean as Urmqi),but I saw it in the tianjin port.Moreover, I learned more about the culture difference between east and west.Felt lots of real living-style from local chinese society,and I spent 2 days to visit the "Forbidden City"---though There were "People mountain people sea" (huge crowds of people) at there .
In the end of the journey, I'm really enjoy this unforgetable experience.
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This was my spiritual trip.
From Urumqi to the capital of China, Beijing, is a distance of 3520km. I went through all the major cities in the eastern part of the ancient Silk Road and I got a powerful culture shock coming into contact with traditional Chinese. From a truly Islamic region to the home of Confucius, from the home of Asian dances and Mukam to the Beijing Opera was a great experience for me.
I have seen many things and had many experiences during that period. From my home I could never see the sea with my own eyes (there is no city in the world as far from the ocean as Urumqi), but I saw it at the port of Tianjin. Moreover, I learned about the cultural differences between the east and west, I experienced the lifestyle of the local Chinese and I spent two days visiting the Forbidden City, though there were “people mountain people sea” (huge crowds of people) there.
After this journey I had a feeling of enjoyment for this unforgettable experience.
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MISTAKE! I MAKE A MISTAKE.. i don't mean it. i just click twice, and then your essay become my comment......sorry.我不是故意的！
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difference between the east and west？ you should also experience the difference between north and south.
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Have fun with your journey =)
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journey to the east
That is my sipirit trip.From Urmqi to the capital of china---Beijing, about 3520km of total distances. Cross all the major city in eastern part of the ancient Silk Road,feel the most powerful traditional culture shock from chinese people.From the genuine Islam region to the home of the Confucius ,frome the center asian dance and Mukam to the Beijing Opera,such a great experence for me.
Too many things I had seen and felt in this period.At my place I have never see the sea by my eyes before(there is no city in all around the world as far from the ocean as Urmqi),but I saw it in the tianjin port.Moreover, I learned more about the culture difference between east and west.Felt lots of real living-style from local chinese society,and I spent 2 days to visit the "Forbidden City"---though There were "People mountain people sea" (huge crowds of people) at there .
In the end of the journey, I'm really enjoy this unforgetable experience.
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