Could you please check these sentences?

< All of them are spoken English >


1, I'll show you to his office. This way, please.

2, I enjoy working.

3, I'm happy with my work.

4, I have a headache and my body aches.

5, I recently moved into a flat but the previous tenants didn't pay the electricity bill.

6, I've never seen him going out. He's always in his room playing computer games.

7, I don't think you gave me the right change back.
I got the wrong change.

8, There is an increasing number of women who have been raped in Korea.

9, I'm staying one more year, because I like living in Korea.

10, Did you download viber app?

11, A girl moved into the next room on Sunday, the girl in the next room is very loud.  (If your talking about the girl who moved into the next room on Sunday you could just say "she is very loud" or (noisy)

12, I thought no one was home

13. I came (went) to get a bus

14, Could you keep it down?

15, This app is free text that from iphone to iphone. This app allows me to send free text from iphone to iphone.

16, While eating together, it's rude to leave earlier than other people.
If you want to leave the table, it is better to say "Please excuse me. I have to leave now."

17, Do you have room for two?

18, (After eating at the restaurant ) Can I get the bill?
Can we pay separately?
Do you offer student discounts?

19, Can I get this gift wrapped, please?

20, I walked as it's not far from my house.

21, I don't want to talk to a complainer and a gossiper 

22, I thought we were going to meet at 5.50 pm.

23, The bus that I'm getting on is in 30 minutes.
So I'm gonna get a bus ano.ther bus station.

24, Why did he allow to live couple in this house? (I did not understand this. Why did he allow to have a couple to live in this house?)

25, Why are you guys always in the kitchen?

26, She came down from upstairs.

27, You look tired.
I'll massage for you. / I'll give you a massage. <--Sounds better than the first one

28, Why are you always complaining to other people?

29, Your face got red suddenly.

30, I saw your boy friend (boyfriend) on the street on my way home last week.

31, My visa will expire in November.

32, I'd like to apply for a visa extension.

33, I thought you are French. You look like French.
Normally, French women have beautiful faces.

34, That night when we were together in the pub was really good.

You did very well, I wasn't sure what you meant on number 24... I change some of your sentences to a way a native speaker would say it.:)