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Have you dreamed of one day being a star? Do you like to watch music videos or movies? I sure do! If you are like me, you've dreamed of one day being a star. Most of us are envious of those stars, they get money for nothing and so many people love them. But is being a star really that much fun? When we watched the videos, we saw the musicions having a great time, but that was just a video, it's just make- believe! Musicions have to practice their instruments every day, for hours andd hours. Even singing is tiring work. Have you tried singing for three hours straight? I guess I'd lose my voice, if I did that. In a word, "No pains, no gains."

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Have you dreamed of one day being a star?

Do you like to watch music videos or movies?  I sure do! If you are like me, you've dreamed of one day being a star.  Most of us are envious of those stars; they get money for nothing and so many people love them.   But is being a star really that much fun?   When we watched the videos, we see the musicians having a great time,  but they're just a videos; it's just make- believe!  Musicians have to practice their instruments every day, for hours andd hours.  Even singing is tiring work.  Have you tried singing for three hours straight?  I guess I'd lose my voice if I did that.  In a word, "No pains, no gains."

Your paragraph flows very nicely, Apple.  Well done.
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Have you dreamed of one day being a star?

Do you like to watch music videos or movies?   I sure do!   If you are like me,   you've dreamed of one day being a star.   Most of us are envious of those stars,   they get money for nothing and so many people love them.   But is being a star really that much fun?   When we watch  videos,   we see the musicians having a great time, but they are just  videos,   it's just make- believe!   Musicians have to practice their instruments every day,   for hours andd hours.   Even singing is tiring work.   Have you tried singing for three hours straight?   I guess I'd lose my voice,   if I did that.   In a word,   "No pain, no gain."

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