First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English and I would like to learn it to make friends from other countries. I want to be a good host for the world cup tournament for allo those who are planning to come here in Brazil.
My native language is Portuguese and I grew up in Brazil.

I enjoy bikes, soccer, playing rock music (I am a drummer) and hanging out with friends.

 PS: you forgot your name :)

Hi Paulo,

Fabpa already made the necessary corrections but also letting you know that many people here (California) who refer to the World Cup, actually say "World Cup", rather than add "tournament" to the end, since it's already implied that the World Cup is a tournament, but both ways are correct.  Also "playing rock music" was only implied since you added in parenthesis that you are a drummer, but what you wrote is fine as well.